Reviews for Strangers
allancaldera chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
I really liked it was so unexpected but good job.
Wicked witch Ayumi chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
The ending was unexpected! xD
I mean, when they talked to each other it wasn't apparent at all!
Anyway, I like your stories, including this one. :3
music.freaxxx chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Aww! I loved it! That ending was just perfect, and I adore that you did that! I lovvve seeing longevity in relationships, and reading stories about it just makes me melt a little...:D This story was so good, and I just...love almost everything you write!(:
evilbunny707 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Awwwwww... at first I wasn't sure how I felt about this story, but I LOVED the ending. Together for twenty years... so cute! :) Very well written. You have AWESOME spelling, punctuation, and grammar! :) Thank you for this wonderful story.
PervEcToy chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
*laughs* Sweet..

Btw, my suspicion has been answered at the end of this story. I can't explain how, but the resume implies that they indeed already know each other.

Even better, it was posted on my birthday. Coincidence, heheh.
The Infinity chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Ohmygods this story was so sweet!

I love the twist at the end! :D

Much love! (As always!)

Lil' Monster
MyFirelightDreams chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
SOBS MY GIRLFRIEND SHOWED ME THIS, CRYING, OH GOD, TEARS ARE RUNNING DOWN MY FACE.

So wonderful I need to scream at you in caps lock. I thought it would be kind of sweet, ya know, two strangers in bed together, alluding to maybe something more.

Then /sobs/ they're so in love after all those years and having sex and playing love games and wahhhh I am going to read all your other works.
TheGhostChild chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
-CRIES- OHMYGOD! That was the most adorable thing ever, I may puke! Just kidding! D; But I really did love it. OH! I'm showing my girlfriend. She's gonna LOVE it :D
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Okay, this was adorable. I love how it turned out just to be a game in the end. I also like how you made both Jacob and Patrick middle-aged instead of teenagers or college aged; it made the story that much more sweeter. Great job :)
lunasea chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I thought this one shot was incredibly cute. Especially the ending haha
foreveran chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I should have seen that coming xD

I really liked it, it gave me happy butterflies at the end :)
Catherine Julia Jefferson chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I was sooo not expecting that twist. Sweet, though. Always glad to see you've posted a new story, and it was particularly refreshing to read about a generally under-represented age group.
Sephy chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Hmm im a teenage girl and i still enjoyed this, as i enjoy all your writing. I didnt really expect the ending, thank you for another wonderful story!
DawnSister chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Aww, that was just fab.

I loved it. So refreshing to read about older men, rather then teenagers and college guys.

You say it is unedited, it doesn't appear to need any editing. Hell, why mess with perfection.

Thanks for this,

DS
S.H. Marr chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I enjoyed it. It was cute and kind of funny, but this is another example of something I've noticed recently: you're kind of devolving into cliches. It was well done, and while I, at least, didn't really predict the ending, it is something I've seen done before. Creative block?