Reviews for The Silver Chain
Daniel Affaro chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
This was really good. The story really had me gripped and after I started reading I couldn't stop. I especially liked the pacing of the chase through the woods. I also liked that the werewolf could be hurt by things like a branch and a bear because so often in horror fiction, the supernatural creature is invulnerable to pretty much everything. My only issue is with the punctuation in speech. Commas and full stops are missing everywhere. Other than that, it was beautifully written. Good Job :)