Reviews for Still Waters Run Deep
YuePantera chapter 10 . 11/5/2012
Yay! More Varen! I've missed him :3 No matter what you think of this chapter, I think it came out really well! You show their feelings for each other well, despite the years that they haven't seen each other. Varen's frustration is shown well too. I think adding some sort of homosexuality to the story also really shows how times have changed since the last chapters and how many years really have gone by. It really shows that times have changed, and that's amazing to show without having to actually spell it out to the readers. :) Well done and yes! You have not only halfway appeased me, I have been greatly appeased! XD x
YuePantera chapter 9 . 8/27/2012
Haha! I'll forgive you for the lack of Varen, as long as I do get all of him I want in later chapters! XD This was a great chapter! I almost forgot how much I love you're writing. This is really coming together nicely and placing it in different times really spices it up! I feel sorry for Uzuri wanting to keep everything locked away, but she needs to go after him! Haha. I can't wait for more!
Haunted Phoenix chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
So it is where they meet right?
trying chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
trying
YuePantera chapter 8 . 7/24/2012
Years have gone by? Oooh! That really adds depth to it! It's really sad, but I can't help feeling that it's leading up to something really nice, whether it's in the near future or not...
Oh dear chapter 7 . 7/24/2012
yipes, what will happen to him now, and what about their relationship...
YuePantera chapter 7 . 7/24/2012
Such a sad chapter... I can't believe Varen's coven could do that! That ending paragraph was really well written and really tugged at my heart strings! You've taken an even more interesting turn in this once again - a direction I hadn't guessed! :)
Tena chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
It is very interesting
YuePantera chapter 6 . 7/21/2012
oh my! How can I end like that? Such an intense chapter, one of the best! It's really getting exciting! I can't wait for the next chapter! Their relationship is really starting to get strained and more impossible now! It's so good! I wonder how it will end? :/
YuePantera chapter 5 . 7/16/2012
? He killed Fyodor? GRAWR! Stupid Gabriel! I feel like I should hate him but I feel more pity! Varen, on the other hand, is still as amazing as normal. ;) hahahaha. Amazing chapter! Great cliffhanger and I did not see this coming! I wonder what will happen now? How will this continue? Great chapter and happy you updated as soon as you did! Waiting for more! X
YuePantera chapter 4 . 7/12/2012
OMG! I love that side of Varen! X') It's sooooooooooo cute! Saying he doesn't want to taint her... He's adorable! I really really really liked this chapter! It's amazing! And that ending... Ooooh! It really is intense! I wonder how you'll lead it on. :3 and I wonder who exactly Gabriel is and what part he plays? He sounds evil! XD though I might be wrong. Haha
One thing wrong.
Une heurs moins quarte means quarter to one, not twelve. But otherwise, it's alllll ammmmmaaazing! I loved it! :3 I can't believe it'll be another five weeks _ how can I wait that long?
YuePantera chapter 3 . 6/16/2012
I loved it when she got jealous! XD had me laughing, don't know why. Haha. This is really well written and I love your description of their clothes! I think I like the gentle side of Varen too. Just everything about him! Haha really good chapter! Can't wait for the next! And the cousins annoyed me... XD
YuePantera chapter 2 . 6/4/2012
Another great chapter. I don't know why, but Varen is really growing on me. XD I love your characters and so far the story is great. I can see a really awkward bit between them coming up soon! Haha or that's just my imagination going wild. Either way, I cant wait for the next one! Good work. X
Bajazzo chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
A true, enticing love story. Love it!
Loric Kane chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Chapter one-Epic

Story-eye candy/brain food

Writer-Genius
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