Reviews for Make It Nasty
Whansbee chapter 13 . 12/12/2012
Option A for me! I want to see the conflict when she returns and Logan is with the other girl.
Also, it would be more interesting to me, if she comes back, while he hasn't yet sorted out his feelings.

This chapter wasn't bad for a filler ;)
Keep at it! (and follow your muse, not necessarily the crowd or any nay-sayer)
Krystine chapter 13 . 12/11/2012
I wonder I if you guys have even realized that jimmy and Logan are the same person! I mean think about it... The phone with the flower wallpaper just like emery had in her phone... Oh and I think that you should combine both a and b. I think that it will make for an excellent story. Oh and she needs to finally get her phone back!
funnechick chapter 13 . 12/9/2012
Option A. And your blog website didn't show up in the chapter.

I am really looking forward to Emery getting something good in life. So, I hope things will be looking up for her...somehow.
mylittleprincess chapter 13 . 12/9/2012
Emery and Logan together!
pornnnnnnnnnn chapter 13 . 12/8/2012
Here's an idea! How about you just delete this whole fucking story, because it's a piece of no-good shit. :)
liks chapter 13 . 12/6/2012
Hi I think u shld go with plan A cause uve invariably already dragged the romance in the story for far too long I think u shld get on with it
And hey pls dnt het me wrong I mean well and I really like the theme of,ur story but I'm just being straight forward
shehasnoname chapter 13 . 12/6/2012
A for sure :)

I think if you go with option B, there'd be many irrelevant chapters to the overall plot line of the story.
And I'm still not so sure I like Logan's character and why Emery likes him the way she though it may have something to do with my bias for Jimmy... c: I think he and Emery would work out better as a couple.
stephyxo chapter 13 . 12/6/2012
A! I can't wait for her to come back ahh
Dancing in Crimson chapter 13 . 12/6/2012
Do (A) I'm obsessed with story and how amazing it is! I miss Emery and I need to see her and Logan together! Ugh I think loving a story this much is unhealthy...oh well absolutely amazing! Update soon! :)
Guest chapter 11 . 12/6/2012
Awesome. Basic teenage dream...beautiful
Nita The Scene chapter 13 . 12/5/2012
Thanks for posting another chapter I thought it was a good idea for you to show Logan's POV for a change. I think you should do maybe a mixture of both A and B. I would like to know a little bit more about Logan but the story is going to get a little dull without it's main character( Emery) missing in action. Or maybe Emery should get a bf too that would be extremely interesting...
Please Update soon and keep up the excellent work. :)
Guest chapter 13 . 12/5/2012
A! We need more Emery and Logan 3
Samantha chapter 4 . 12/5/2012
Me and my roommate love your story! It is truly amazing; you're very articulate and descriptive. The way you weave the tale is great. We love the progression of Emery and Logan's relationship thus far; every time they interact we can't help but grin mad hard. We think you have amazing talent, and should look to get the story published when you're finished. Update soon! :) We also love the humor in the story, as well as the title because we definitely dance to that song on the regular. Maybe next story you write could be called F**king Problem, lol ;D
Just a Little Miss chapter 13 . 12/5/2012
B, I think. I want to hate Logan for a little while. He definetly deserves it. So yeah.
I'd also like to see a bit of her as well as Darrel's life since she left. But I suppose that's up to you :)
good writing, little miss anxious
Demon Chic 101 chapter 13 . 12/5/2012
Can't you do a and b? Bring emery back but still continue with logan pov. Oh and jimmy's logan right? Cool I like it and keep us posted here.
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