Reviews for Make It Nasty
Krystine chapter 13 . 12/11/2012
I wonder I if you guys have even realized that jimmy and Logan are the same person! I mean think about it... The phone with the flower wallpaper just like emery had in her phone... Oh and I think that you should combine both a and b. I think that it will make for an excellent story. Oh and she needs to finally get her phone back!
funnechick chapter 13 . 12/9/2012
Option A. And your blog website didn't show up in the chapter.

I am really looking forward to Emery getting something good in life. So, I hope things will be looking up for her...somehow.
mylittleprincess chapter 13 . 12/9/2012
Emery and Logan together!
pornnnnnnnnnn chapter 13 . 12/8/2012
Here's an idea! How about you just delete this whole fucking story, because it's a piece of no-good shit. :)
liks chapter 13 . 12/6/2012
Hi I think u shld go with plan A cause uve invariably already dragged the romance in the story for far too long I think u shld get on with it
And hey pls dnt het me wrong I mean well and I really like the theme of,ur story but I'm just being straight forward
shehasnoname chapter 13 . 12/6/2012
A for sure :)

I think if you go with option B, there'd be many irrelevant chapters to the overall plot line of the story.
And I'm still not so sure I like Logan's character and why Emery likes him the way she though it may have something to do with my bias for Jimmy... c: I think he and Emery would work out better as a couple.
stephyxo chapter 13 . 12/6/2012
A! I can't wait for her to come back ahh
Dancing in Crimson chapter 13 . 12/6/2012
Do (A) I'm obsessed with story and how amazing it is! I miss Emery and I need to see her and Logan together! Ugh I think loving a story this much is unhealthy...oh well absolutely amazing! Update soon! :)
Guest chapter 11 . 12/6/2012
Awesome. Basic teenage dream...beautiful
Nita The Scene chapter 13 . 12/5/2012
Thanks for posting another chapter I thought it was a good idea for you to show Logan's POV for a change. I think you should do maybe a mixture of both A and B. I would like to know a little bit more about Logan but the story is going to get a little dull without it's main character( Emery) missing in action. Or maybe Emery should get a bf too that would be extremely interesting...
Please Update soon and keep up the excellent work. :)
Guest chapter 13 . 12/5/2012
A! We need more Emery and Logan 3
Samantha chapter 4 . 12/5/2012
Me and my roommate love your story! It is truly amazing; you're very articulate and descriptive. The way you weave the tale is great. We love the progression of Emery and Logan's relationship thus far; every time they interact we can't help but grin mad hard. We think you have amazing talent, and should look to get the story published when you're finished. Update soon! :) We also love the humor in the story, as well as the title because we definitely dance to that song on the regular. Maybe next story you write could be called F**king Problem, lol ;D
Just a Little Miss chapter 13 . 12/5/2012
B, I think. I want to hate Logan for a little while. He definetly deserves it. So yeah.
I'd also like to see a bit of her as well as Darrel's life since she left. But I suppose that's up to you :)
good writing, little miss anxious
Demon Chic 101 chapter 13 . 12/5/2012
Can't you do a and b? Bring emery back but still continue with logan pov. Oh and jimmy's logan right? Cool I like it and keep us posted here.
unthinkable123 chapter 13 . 12/5/2012
Definitely option 'A'
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