Wow poor emery... Made me cry my eyes out. Her mom is a real BITCH... Please update soon

That chapter made me cry..please don't send her away

I love 'make it nasty'. Can't wait for more romance:))

please update fast .

UPDATE SOON! Love this story, seriously.

The next chapter is gonna be juicy? Hmm... I'm looking forward to it. :) anyway, this chapter was good and I liked how you explained how Darrell feels about the whole Logan and Emery thing. There where a few typos in this chapter, I don't remember any of them specifically except for the last line where you're missing 'it' where you said she'd make it up to him tomorrow. The typos don't annoy me that much coz there were only a few but you should get someone to check over your work to avoid them. Have a ice day and hope the next one is up soon!

Fell in love with this story. Update soon! Please.

Up. Date. Soon. (:

Don't listen to Cairo in the City Eternal, he/she's just mad that their stories don't have the same great response that yours do :)

more pleasee

So, *takes a huge breath* I have finally caught up with you!
As you already know, I love this story so you just keep doing what you do best, which is writing.
And uploading.
And being so bloody perfect!
"Why are you looking at me like that I say!"
*wide eyes*
OMG WILL YOU GET OFF MY CASE! I'M NOT JEALOUS!

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Not a single bit!

I lie.

Logan and Emery/Alisha and Jimmy are such children. Everything that comes out of Logan's mouth, from raping/ravishing her to 'riding me', is disgusting and disrespectful. Emery has absolutely LOW standards, if she has any at all. I'm not sure what else to say about this.

What is wrong with these kids? They spoiled, entitled, overtly sexual and disrespectful, to themselves and everyone else. I have been readong this story for nine chapters and the characters have yet to endear themselves to me. They joke about rape, claim things that aren't theirs, and feel rather unrealistic.

The scene in the pool was my least favorite next to the Victoria's Secret scene (a store no child should shop in as is) because of the cliche 'he got my hair wet but it's okay because he kissed me' bit.

Juicy! I bet Logan is Jimmy! That would totally be awesome :D Hahaha anyway love your writing and good job. Love it!

awesome! update more.