Reviews for A Little Rusty
impastable chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
I really love this. I usually am not a fan of more structured poetry, but this is stunning. You make it flow so naturally, that the reader hardly notices its structure at all. Furthermore, the subject matter is near and dear to my own heart. This is a truly lovely piece.
SarahxVanity chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
This was really cute I like the way it rhymes and the comparisons to the clock
WordsTasteLikeCaramel chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Beautiful- it has a lovely theme running through it. I think it's creative and sweet, in a sincere, realistic way that gives you a warm hopeful feeling _ it's definitely going onto my favorites list I can relate to it as well- thank you for writing such a gem of a poem.
mimoxtreemo chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Short and sweet, just the way I like it. Good job :)