|Reviews for Magical Shiny Land|
| kate800 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
In this story there are a few capitalization and puctuation errors and several grammar/word errors that can be fixed simply by reading over it again. Otherwise, it's a great story! the only real problem I have with it is it would probably do better in the fanfiction section. Anyway, good descriptions of what they look like, I could almost see them myself. This story made me laugh so hard, and I couldn't stop reading! Definately added to my favorites.