|Reviews for Romance on the Roof|
| Shailaputri chapter 1 . 4/7/2017
Her character is kind of unique. Whereas his confession comes quickly without any emotional background.
| FreekyDisaster18 chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Well you told me to ignore this so it was obviously the first one I sought out. HP, this is a really cute story! I adore the best friend cliche and it's captured wonderfully here. The two characters are simply adorable and highly realistic. My only downside is sometimes it seemed almost list like rather than a flowing story but we have all been there. My advice would be to read over your stories when you're reading and make sure you've got flow. However, it was still a beautiful read and I think you used the prompt well. Fabulous. I pray that you're doing it this year and you upload soon.
| Funshine Tonks chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Aww it's so cute and fluffy! You should continue this it'd be really interesting!
| Ceri Anne chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Squee! This was the cutest! Jace was just... wow! I love the best friend cliché and this just pretty much filled me up for the week :)
| Julietish chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
After reviewing all the submissions, your entry was not selected as the winner. However, you stil get a review!
Right from the start, I could see that you're a talented writer. I like your narrative voice- it's humorous and entertaining. The only issue I had was the occasional run-on sentences. I love Jace's cockiness and kindness- their friendship is very strong and I can imagine their relationship will be as well. Wonderful entry!
| She Loves Rainbows chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
This was cute :) and I enjoyed reading it. No matter if it's a cliche because life is full of cliches! I look forward to reading more of your writings :D
| Oneah J chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Well, I think there's too much ego boost on the part of the guy. But, such a nice story! I think it was a good idea to describe the female lead character taking photos in the first part, kind of implying her talent in photography, and that she's good at it, before what for me is a cliche drama where the girl having low self-esteem, that the handsome guy she likes could impossibly like her back. It gives a notion that she might not really be hopeless at all! Because she's good at something, and well I guess no person is ugly, her dream guy could be liking her back. Good one! :D