Reviews for Sun
AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Never would have imagined calling the sun "sweet thing!" To me this echoes the voice in the crowd of one witnessing a genius of some sort- too close and it burns- fans almost trapped by a need for live-giving heat. Whether it's a symbol or not, the poem itself catches me!
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
I like this a lot. Talking to objects is such an interesting idea, and you handled it really well.
Scarlet-SKull chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Sweet, the words poured out so smoothly. Well written! I enjoy reading your poems.