Reviews for Lovely Secrets
Nintendo Fan 101 chapter 12 . 1/6/2013
Taylor had her baby on her birthday, Stephanie had twins, and Brooke is having triplets. Lots of grandkids!
AhtramLebasi chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
oh my gosh! so many things happened in this chapter! XX) i cant believe Taylor's dad tormented her action :/
JJsMommy29 chapter 11 . 10/11/2012
so can't wait for more loving this story and i think Brooke should have 2 babies and Taylor should have 1 and also like Tristan better then Ryan, Stephanie better then Brooke and Paige better then Brooke and not sure between Brandon and Carson
JJsMommy29 chapter 10 . 9/24/2012
Stephanie was dreaming about Tristan asking her to Marry him before he got on a plane for the army. It's a toss up between Ryan and Carson like them about the same Paige better then Taylor, and Stephanie better then Brooke and Tristan a whole lot more then Spencer.
JJsMommy29 chapter 9 . 9/13/2012
would love to read Tristan Pov in a side story also who i like better Paige over Nicole Stephanie and Ryan Both Matt and Jared can't really pick between those two and Tristan over Spencer and Taylor over Austin can't wait for more so update soon
Unicornswag chapter 8 . 9/7/2012
Ok i like this story so far, but it is pretty unrealistic like the whole Spencer tried to kill her and than hey because you just found out you were cheated on by my brother I'm going to be super nice?
JJsMommy29 chapter 8 . 8/18/2012
hope that everything with Taylor and her baby is okay and can't wait for Tristan to come back into the picture and yeah i have to say that Spencer redeemed himself by being nice and taking Stephanie back to the hospital. And i like both Stephanie and Ryan i have to say Paige over Nicole not sure about Brandon or Carson that one's a toss up and Spencer better then Austin can't wait for more so update soon
Latinoprincess chapter 7 . 7/25/2012
Nice story... Wow Spencer/Austin are total pyschos. Good job!
Ophelia Schmit chapter 7 . 7/24/2012
I love the suspense you put into it! I also love the flashback! Of course, my know-it-all self must come in to action. I feel like this is way too rushed, and it's like everybody, not just Taylor, is on a mood swing. One minute, they're mad over Taylor's pregnancy (especially Brooke and Dad), then they go and are all happy.

And I don't think the dad should be too angry for this. He gave his daughter the condom, he should have been expecting this. It doesn't matter if he should expect the condom to be safe, things don't always work out as they intend to be.

-Hermie
Ophelia Schmit chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
"The saddest thing...is all of it could have been avoided!"

Sorry, I like to spew my favorite singer's lyrics anytime I can. I find this realistic, but what bothers me to no return is that instead of saying "hon", you used "Hun". Unless you're talking about Attila, you use "h-o-n". Sorry, this is just a suggestion. :)

-Hermie
JJsMommy29 chapter 7 . 7/24/2012
Loved this chapter your doing an amazing job on this story. Ilike Nicole and Stephanie the and Taylor better then Brandon just cause he hasn't been in the story much to really get to know him Also don't care for Austin or Spencer right now and i am hoping that they don't get there revenge and that Nicole and Stephanie can come up with a plan to get away from them and not sure if they will make it out alive or not but i hope so. Update soon
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I think this story is...different. Odd, but not cliche (that's for sure). But, why would her own FATHER give her a condom? It's common sense. My dad would kill me if I ever did that, but I plan on being a virgin forever (I'm my own person, you can give me crap on that, I don't care. I don't want children, I'd be a terrible mother). I'm not ranting or anything if that seems like it to you, I'm just using logic.

-Hermie
JJsMommy29 chapter 6 . 7/1/2012
sad chapter but you did great on it and i like Stephanie better and Ryan just cause he's a country boy also i like Tristan better then Austin and Yes at least i am hoping that Tristan will live and not sure what Taylor should name her babies and i think she should only have one but can't wait to see what happens next and to find out who Spencer is so update soon
JJsMommy29 chapter 5 . 6/25/2012
this story is kind of weird but so can't wait to see what happens next so update soon
JJsMommy29 chapter 4 . 6/13/2012
interesting so can't wait to see what happens next so update soon
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