Reviews for An Encounter
Valenteen chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
It's good, and very perceptive as to how people do that in real life. :)
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Awh this is cute and had a really terrific flow. The only thing that broke the flow or the rhyme scheme for me for a split second was the lines "I now am the one to avert my gaze/You aren't worth the trouble, not one more day." Because gaze and day don't rhyme... Unless you wanted to manipulate it into sounding like gaze by writing "days" but I wouldn't take out the lines because their genius. Other than that little note, this was cute and refreshing to read with the rhyme scheme. Non rhyming poems have a beauty too, but c'mon, who doesn't love rhymes? Keep writing!