Reviews for Stardust
blue eyed bitch chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
this is awesome. critiques? idk... it was pretty good already.
FrEaK.AuTuMn chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Alright. Some of it, my mind was confused on, but my heart read it clearly. I loved this poem, and I don't know what else you can do to make it better. It was...amazing. you are amazing
FrEaK.AuTuMn chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Alright. Some of it, my mind was confused on, but my heart read it clearly. I loved this poem, and I don't know what else you can do to make it better. It was...amazing. you are amazing
electrical moon chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Wow. This is a powerful poem. My one suggestion would be to add some punctuation.