Reviews for A new dawn Rising
MoxiLand chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, I like it :D but I think there are a few errors here and there but we all make mistakes, ye?

I like Sebastian, I think he could be a very good character and I look forward to seeing his development. Your summary isn't the best but it that can be easily overlooked because the writing itself is really good. Please update soon, I'm excited to read more :)