Reviews for Broken For Good
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This is so tragic, but reality for a lot of people. Beautifully written, the rhyme scheme was well structured [somewhat unusual choice of rhyme, but I like to see variation :)] and the ending was gorgeous in a somewhat dark way. Keep writing, it's obvious you have talent :)
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I see you played with different rhyming in this one and I quite enjoyed it. You didn't create this one in a thick hopelessness like your others. You created it like a cold hard fact and that was pretty cool to see.
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
True Talker chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
This made me sad and it makes me think.
whisper queen chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
riah, won't you believe me? you're like my sister, you can't just NOT believe me...
Doctor Alexander chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
You know, the probability of you surviving after cardiac arrest was 6.5 out of a hundred. It really amazing that you're still alive! X3
YuePantera chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Oooh. This is very haunting in a way, I must say. I liked it. It's not normally the scene that people would put into a poem, but I liked it for that reason. It's unique and well written. Good work! X