Reviews for Glass Kisses
electrical moon chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Lovely poem! I love the imagery of 'glass kisses' and the references to Greek mythology. I would suggest moving 'just' up a line next to 'and' in the line 'burn alongside you. and'. Either that, or getting rid of the 'and' all together and moving up the just. To me, the 'and' seems a little awkward by itself. Also, I think the word 'doling' doesn't really fit, but that's just my opinion.