Reviews for Miscarriage
ensconced chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Heart-wrenching but eloquent.

Christine
Dixie Sweetheart chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Thank you for writing this. It brought tears to my eyes. It's beautiful.
AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Like the lack of capital letters- echoes the sense of aloneness for both of them and the narrator. The opening 5 lines precisely set up the mood for what follows. The only 2 spots I get a little confused about are "not remain stuck in her belly." I think it means footprints; maybe "not have them remain?" Not sure. Also I understand who "wishing for better memories" modifies, but I'm not sure grammar wise. This is a beautifully written poem about a difficult subject. "lost beginnings and broken endings" is gorgeous.