Reviews for You Are My Only Family
Collins-A chapter 17 . 5/25/2016
Not gonna lie, bit creepy that Scott is shivering from a kids touch to be pelvic bone..
Fryvi chapter 7 . 5/20/2016
This is so cute! x)
And I like how you've written James so far. He seems quite realistic as a kid
Old fragrance chapter 14 . 4/2/2016
Hi !

I love your story so far !
So, a native french and a pmr intern (what was the chance ? :) ) i decided to take it upon me to correct your french.
First of all, it s pretty good. I only took notice of three mistakes, you saoule use instead :
-"je me rappelle de toi, Pierre." but you could use "je me rappelle de vous, Pierre" if you want it to be more polite. Usually children use "vous" when adressing adultes other than family.
-Je t'ai rencontré tu étais si petit...
"-Quelle matière, quelle couleur" it s female so you need to use quelle et non quel :) and fabrique is not the translation of fabric, it s tissu or matière
Otherwise it's pretty good :)

Forgive me if there is english mistakes, i m still not entirely fluent...
Please keep on writing, it s really a good and funny read :)
samekraemer chapter 43 . 3/24/2015
Again...lovely. Great spin for the epi. Thanks again for sharing. SK
samekraemer chapter 42 . 3/24/2015
EXCELLENT! I loved this story so much. The characters came alive to me, and that's a gift you've given all of us. Thank you for sharing. SK
samekraemer chapter 36 . 3/24/2015
Go Wild Willie! Woop!
samekraemer chapter 34 . 3/24/2015
Scott needs to cut Madeline - literally and figuratively! Great chapter. SK
samekraemer chapter 32 . 3/24/2015
What a bitch! Those grandparents should be horsewhipped! Great chapter.
samekraemer chapter 30 . 3/24/2015
Great date! Glad to see Will's starting to get on board the Scott-train. Great job. SK
samekraemer chapter 29 . 3/24/2015
Great chapter. Love James!
samekraemer chapter 27 . 3/24/2015
I thought it was a great chapter. SK
samekraemer chapter 24 . 3/24/2015
Uh-oh. First fight...not good.
samekraemer chapter 23 . 3/24/2015
YAY! Houston, we have lift off!
samekraemer chapter 18 . 3/23/2015
Cliche or not, it was a wonderful chapter! I'm so happy I found this story. SK
samekraemer chapter 16 . 3/23/2015
I love James! He's a great character. Good job. SK
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