Not gonna lie, bit creepy that Scott is shivering from a kids touch to be pelvic bone..

This is so cute! x)
And I like how you've written James so far. He seems quite realistic as a kid

Hi !

I love your story so far !
So, a native french and a pmr intern (what was the chance ? :) ) i decided to take it upon me to correct your french.
First of all, it s pretty good. I only took notice of three mistakes, you saoule use instead :
-"je me rappelle de toi, Pierre." but you could use "je me rappelle de vous, Pierre" if you want it to be more polite. Usually children use "vous" when adressing adultes other than family.
-Je t'ai rencontré tu étais si petit...
"-Quelle matière, quelle couleur" it s female so you need to use quelle et non quel :) and fabrique is not the translation of fabric, it s tissu or matière
Otherwise it's pretty good :)

Forgive me if there is english mistakes, i m still not entirely fluent...
Please keep on writing, it s really a good and funny read :)

Again...lovely. Great spin for the epi. Thanks again for sharing. SK

EXCELLENT! I loved this story so much. The characters came alive to me, and that's a gift you've given all of us. Thank you for sharing. SK

Go Wild Willie! Woop!

Scott needs to cut Madeline - literally and figuratively! Great chapter. SK

What a bitch! Those grandparents should be horsewhipped! Great chapter.

Great date! Glad to see Will's starting to get on board the Scott-train. Great job. SK

Great chapter. Love James!

I thought it was a great chapter. SK

Uh-oh. First fight...not good.

YAY! Houston, we have lift off!

Cliche or not, it was a wonderful chapter! I'm so happy I found this story. SK

I love James! He's a great character. Good job. SK