WHO WEARS MAKEUP AT 13-14?!

aww this chapter was so cute, Finn with the little brothers is literally my favorite. i'm confused as to what Maxwell said about letting someone go if you love them. i feel like it has more meaning but i could just be totally wrong i probably am i don't know. great chaptterrr! :)

You updated! *squeal* Great chapter! I look forward to more :)

UPDATE! BEST...STORY...EVER...UPDATE! :) ;)

Blegh..I feel so bad for Liz, having to watch her best friend and brother kiss in front of her! Great chapter!

Great chapter as always!

Great story so far!

ugh Finn is really bothering me. i really liked him for a while and now i don't and i really want to like him again. this was such a short chapter, i really wish i knew what was going to happen next this story just keeps changing and changing, i hope it changes for the better next time! just for your information, i am totally working on my next chapter and hopefully it won't take as long for me to put it up as last time, but i've been really busy and it's been difficult to work, but i think about working on it everyday, so it will be up i promise!

Finn's smart but... I dunno... cooky?

Okay Finn is officially a jerk. BUT WHY WHAT NO because now Finn and Liz won't get along and Lily and Liz won't get along and i know it i just know it that Liz will be the one left out feeling like she screwed everything up and oh my god why does Finn have to be a jerk i had such an attractive picture of him in my head noooo. write write write i need to know what happensss

Just amazing. Excellent switchup there, definitely keeping my interest. The characters seem pretty realistic but just make sure you don't get too carried away. (Not that you have) Perhaps a bit more description but excellent job so far!

oh no. now i don't know how i feel about Lily. but i still feel bad for Liz because she's in the middle of all this, i totally know how she feels. wow though, you write fast! 2 updates within 2 days. i write awfully slow, and I won't have internet for a while so my next update will be next week at least, just thought i'd let you know. keep goinggg! I want to know what Lily says!

Can i have her brothers please? And why can't Finn's nice side last long? I like it! I'm so caught in between feeling bad for Lily and feeling bad for Liz because they're both in such tough situations. This is sooooo good, I really want to know what happens next

As always, great chapter! And yes, lenient is spelled correctly. I'm surprised to see you have gotten this far in your story! :D It's a great accomplishment to get through 16 chapters. I don't quite know what you should do next with the characters but you've done a great job so far. :) My only concern is... don't make it too cliche.

Aww... Can you give me a Maxwell? I think I'm in love.