|Reviews for Betrayer|
| FlamingHooligan chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I don't know what to say except that it hurts. It hurts it hurts it hurts it hurts and I feel myself doubting a betrayer and myself every time I see her. My betrayal was no where near as painful as yours, but it still made me feel sick when it happened. I'm so sorry you had to go through this.
| steph135 chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
wow, very powerful! i can tell that this was something you needed to get off your back and im glad you used this wedsite as an outlet for this unfortunate situation. i feel like i can relate to this very well and so can my friend. i feel like you spoke the words straight out of her mind because this poem sounds like exactly what she went through and i as well. i think you portrayed the feelings of betrayal so well and deeply described how it feels to be stabbed in the back by one you thought you could trust. the one you thought was your fellow man. great job my friend, and please share more of your work with us! i look forward to reading more :)