Reviews for The Golden house book one Mind and Heart
UselessAcc25 chapter 2 . 6/16/2012
I assume this is the story you wanted me to read...

This is fairly good so far, I mean, considering there's only two chapters. I'm not quite sure of what's going on yet, but you can almost tell that something major will be happening.

You've done good with the characters, describing them and all. It lets us know that there's multiple people involved and they're all different.

I recommend you continue with this.
Singing Ink chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
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ChristinaLahey chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
I have to say it was really good. I was kinda bummed you didn't continue. The characters are all very different and with completely different personalities. And I could see all that in the first chapter.

Please continue. I would love to see where you take this.
ChristinaLahey chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
I have to say it was really good. I was kinda bummed you didn't continue. The characters are all very different and with completely different personalities. And I could see all that in the first chapter.

Please continue. I would love to see where you take this.