Reviews for The Unthinkable Nightmare
Naver chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Parting ways with the one you love always sad...
Hmm.. I almost imagine this with a second part. Good poem, continue to write. :)
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Is it weird I can vividly imagine the beginning for some reason? I love how you keep climbing higher though and the path is really deep...I imagine this impossible path and It's to hard and when you part ways I have feeling that the other person will follow the path but you won't

P.s the fork on the road reminds me of the ending of a movie with a guy standing at fork in the road and it ends with him just standing there with the audience not knowing which way he will choice (I think it's a famous movie but I don't remember the name it came in 2007 or 2003 or somewhere in the 200's)

Loveeee the poem!
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Loved it. Your first line was just perfect, it outlines the poem and is perfect.

Loved this! :-D