I feel so horribly sorry for him. If this is a romance, who will Dahlia's love interest be?

What an amazing read! I love that your characters have so much depth to them. Please update! Can't wait for more.

I wonder what Bahkeric did that's so wrong...why did it have to be him? Why is he now being punished/tortured by Ezra?
Something about him disgusts me but also makes me curious.
I wish you the best of luck with your writing and hope inspiration hits you! :D

I am very pleased with this chapter and temporary POV change.

I am really enjoying where this story is going. I would suggest 'dread' replace the word 'regret' since regret refers to something that has happened or been done, and he hasn't killed her yet, right? Just a suggestion please keep on writing and sharing this awesomeness! :3

Yay Dahlia! Im glad it wasn't a dream. :3

Stupid review system wouldn't let me review the two other chapters...I wanted to post 'no dammit' when Oax died...:( she should be using this as a chance to ask him his motives, why he killed Oax&took her...

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Dearie shoulda stolen the potion. It would be a handy thing to have.

I volunteer as tribute! Meh it's probs too late...I'm fond of Oax. Would be a pity if he died.

I'm just wow I'm really impressed really speechless.

Rose Alchemist, its been so long since you updated.. You're not going to continue the story?... :'(
I really love your plot and the setting.. I've read quite others but not as intriguing as this one.. Would you come back...? Pretty please? *puppy eye Pweasee?

Omg! Experimenting on a kid! That's terrible! The king is very selfless that tear showed how much he's hurting for having to sacrifice his child for the safety of his people :s this chapter left me in tears :'(
Well done
And thank you for updating

I love this story, I honestly, truly do. I started reading it today, and just finished the chapter. I didn't even cringe once! I'm so happy! I love the names of the races and your character's names. Makes me want to actually get to writing my fantasy/romance story that I've been wanting to write...heh. Hey! Maybe if I get it up you can read it and tell me what you think? Yes?

I love this :) it is really interesting how you came up with the name for the races :D