|Reviews for Paragon of Justice: Crimson Ranger!|
| HeroSpirit chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
"turn your brain off?"... "not intended for expert anal-ists?"... Dude, you're writing a parody, not a picture-book. If your not willing to take serious critisism then I don't even know what you're doing here.
As for the story, I enjoyed the quirky humor that you and most parodies offer. The dialouge was well written, and the plot was sketchy... just as a parody should be. However, If I didn't know any better, I'd say this story is a "Viewtiful Joe" wannabe... Good thing I know better.
There are many run-on and redundant sentences here though. This can easy be fixed by reading your work to yourself aloud and tweeking any sentences that sound wrong. Do all this before posting once or twince and you should be good.
I look forward to seeing more of this.