Reviews for What We Have
DeathTheGirl chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
ohmygod, that was poetically beautiful, this piece is amazing, hell it should win an award. amazing job. i loved this, and it blew my mind at the end. Brilliant
meowmie chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Firetrucking a-a-w-w-esome! The way you built the tension in the beginning and getting to the smut(which I love every word of it) and the ending is flawless ヾ(@@)ノ
Netty chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
It's pretty good.
Aveepop chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
I thought I left a review, as I usually do, but then I remembered I read it rushing out the door to school one morning. You are so talented, you HAVE to get an A in English or else the system isn't worth a thing (which after thinking about it, it probably isn't worth a thing) Keep on writing, keep on dreaming and you WILL make it as an author and definitely a poet, I hope to buying a book of poem by you in the VERY near future :) Keep up this amazing work which I simply can't comprehend how you do it with just pure raw emotions..
DeadToBeginWith chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Well. What can I say? Bear with me, this may take a while.

First of all, your brilliant. You really, really are, and I wish that you'd believe me. God knows I've tried. I have a theory, though. I think that this is what you're best at; one-shots and poetry, stories that just touch in on a situation or a character, and stay only for a little while. That's why you're better than me; I need more time, longer stories to get the best out of my characters, but you can do it in a few hundred words, like you show here. As for the actual story, it's brilliant how you use your own feeling and emotions to write with. It makes for a really good read.

On a lighter note, you've gotten better at the smut since we were 12 xD

You know I love you, right?

- J