Reviews for Mommy's Little Killer
slothqueen851 chapter 1 . 2/13
love it. its great for a short story
Ice Bubble chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
I like the irony present. Good luck to Officer Downs in explaining how he got everything he needed from a ghost. Unless, of course, they find the father. *purses lips* Now I wish it was longer. But the suspense is absolutely splendid!
Fav. part:
"Not really. At first, I was scared, and then I did something and felt better."
SkyeValley chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
FREAKY. FREAKY AND CREEPY. This was dang good! Though, when it stopped my reaction was something along the lines of: "Dang, I wish it was longer..." It was great, though! I loved it!
Oh well chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
This sent shivers down my spine. It's been a long time since a story got some kind of reaction from me.

I loved it.
EmoKiss chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Holy this was really good...And really creepy, but netherless, really good.

This makes me scared of my little cousin now...
totallyawesome chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
this is amazingly well written and i really hope you continue soon!:)
Noctiphobia chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
I think it was a tad too short, but it was a great short story with a nice twist. Maybe you could proof-read in the future and to see if theres anything you could make more descriptive. I'm a big fan of your work. All in all it was a nice story, I just want more detail in the future. Nice job though.
blue eyed bitch chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
this is fucking scary. good job.