Reviews for the end
Chezaru chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
I like all your poems. Alot. I like alot of things about them. :)
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
i know it sounds stupid but.. thats really deep.
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
A tense, emotional scene you've captured here. I kind of wish there was more (so little is revealed and I'm curious as to what's going on), but in a way I don't think more is needed.

This is one of those I'm conflicted about. I like it, but I'm conflicted about it.
surelynot chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I hope you're okay. Reading your work and some of the reviews left, I'm kinda worried for you. Please reach out to somebody if you're struggling to stand it - there are so many people willing to help.

You are, by your work, a really clever, talented person - I admire your writing very much and I beg you, please, if you're in a dark place there are people who can help you.
we've got obsessions chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
i love this. the repitition of the phrase "an accident" makes the whole thing so much more powerful. chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Okay. Ellie, you're starting to scare me. Please, please just talk to me. Please.
KatieMichelle chapter 1 . 6/3/2012

I like the dialogue. You don't see that in too many other poems on FictionPress.