Reviews for Four Lives, Four Seasons
Dreamers-Requiem chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Really good, especially for a first attempt. I won't go into too much detail because poetry isn't my strong suit, but I think there's a really nice rhythm to this, and I like how it comes full cycle with the old chapter ending at the start, and a new chapter starting at the end. Lovely imagery, too. Good stuff.
Umekogal chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
I love it. It has a nice rhythmic feel overall, and it captures the essence of the passing seasons in the forest, the hunt, the trees and so on. Especially love the ending part - a new chapter sung. That brings the poem full circle.