|Reviews for You Can Run|
| Stellar Eclipse chapter 20 . 1/19/2014
This chapter was indeed a plot twist, haha. I knew Wes was up to no good, considering he smokes pot... But seriously, how does Calli keep getting people to find out her secret?
P.S. Just so you know I actually read this a while ago but didn't decide to review until now.
P.P.S. I'm glad you're okay! I hope you don't take so long to update next time...
P.P.P.S. I'm pretty sure at least half of my reviews are me telling you to update faster so sorry for being impatient. I understand if there's too much stuff going on in your life.
| You say No chapter 20 . 1/12/2014
Woah, actually I picked this up today and YUS! In all actuality I was rooting for Ian, he's awesome Wes is sweet and all but something was always off about him... Also Calli didn't feel much with Wes's tongue and /that/ is never a good sign in determining affection. I know that Calli has been keeping this 'secret' but honestly since how long has Ian known? And why would he have his sister do it? If his sister will be there then Calli will have girl time with Anya/Ariel? :D Anyways sorry for this random bunches of my thoughts. Thank you for writing! This is pretty amazing!
| You say No chapter 11 . 1/12/2014
You know I've been holding in all my tears since I learned about Calli's situation but the tears spilled in this chapter(11) because I'd honestly have a complete and utter mental breakdown with the scar fucker and being an orphan who actually chose to take care of others. I'd probably go to an asylum.
So when Calli was on the verge of having an all out panic attack I cried while laughing, I was really fucking sad that the fear could do that- that it is the worst kind of scar besides physically.
Thanks for making me realize how emotionally invested with this story I was. This is entirely possible for a unfortunate person...
This is also a fantastic story that actually has me laughing out loud also so please keep up the awesome work!
| sadiekanetheevilmarshmallow chapter 20 . 12/25/2013
Damn, don't you ever even dare to discontinue post chapters more frequently and good lord you're an amazing writer I can expect this to be a a best seller. Your witty comebacks are wonderfully delicious to short
This story is goddamn wonderful.
| StalkingClouds chapter 20 . 12/13/2013
Wes is gay? Noooooo! I actually liked the guy. And oh my God Ian did not just say that *snaps fingers* but seriously how did he know they were in a relationship? Does he have like spies or something? I've been waiting forever for this update and I'm glad I waited cause it slapped me right across the face the moment Ian was like 'Callista' and I was like 'Oh hell to the no!'. Please update, I'm literally obsessed with your story:)
| NerotheNinja chapter 20 . 12/7/2013
what the fuck?
I stop going on fictionpress for a few months and THIS HAPPENS
GOD DAMN IT
I love Ian though can I have him pleasseeeee?
| Adria Zoi Parzifal chapter 20 . 12/4/2013
So besides the fact that you're an absolutely awful person for leaving me to die here without an update... HOLY SHIT. That's kinda all I can say for this chapter because HOLY FUCKING SHIT HE KNOWS and he's not being a complete asshole about it? Well no more than usual? That's like... Awe inspiring. And totally curse worthy. And Wes... Damn. Although I really like Ian. Like a lot, I think he and Cal have this thing going on were they're both sarcastic smart asses and secretly are like, enjoying each other's company. And they're so freaking funny together, I love it. So you know, I wouldn't be too cut up if Cal ended up with him instead of Wes. I actually think it would be so great because everything that happens that involves the two of them cracks me up. So maybe you could put in a bit more Cal/Ian convos? Hilarious ones. Oh, and you rock for finally updating. If you keep it up I will continue to praise your genius and stroke your ego in wonderful ways.
I was so excited when I finally checked my email and this was in there. I could barely sit through meditation class (even though I didn't really want to in the first place). You did not disappoint. :). Update!
| augmentedDREAMS chapter 20 . 12/3/2013
When Ian said "Yeah, she did, Callista." I was like"...Waaaaaaaaaaaaaat?"
LOL. And NOOO! DX why couldn't you just let Wes and Cal have their happily ever after together? *bawls*
| Yabu chapter 20 . 12/3/2013
MORE (please) xxx
| augmentedDREAMS chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
I just re-read this all over again. I have to say I can't get enough. Why you no update in so long? Makes me all pouty and sad.
| ClaireJAngel chapter 19 . 9/18/2013
Pleaseeeee continue with the chapter, you're nearly there :D
| Stellar Eclipse chapter 19 . 9/11/2013
Well, that was an interesting (but hilarious) tidbit about Ian. I love reading the sarcastic banter you come up with, so please update soon!
| KayaxXX chapter 19 . 8/15/2013
The plot is great so far!
| Buttersmash chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
This is funny.
| Terri-ific chapter 5 . 7/11/2013
It's an entertaining story so far. The only think I would clear up is the time frames. In the previous chapter she woke up at 7 with a 1hour shower, then did home work for several hours when Ian woke up at 11. After that she went to eat, then went to the boathouse. In this chapter it has her going into town at 9, and the had to be back at 3. I'm assuming all of this happened on Saturday.
I just figured I would let you know. Keep up the good work!