Reviews for Little Boots
Vad73 chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
Wow, this nearly made me cry, nice ending, and I like how you repeated it. This is a really good way of expressing the 6 word flash fiction.
DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
A beautiful poem I love the story it tells and the link between the start and end. Well done :)

Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
This poem made me shiver. So sad, yet you got to love it. I can relate to this piece because I lost 3 siblings in a similar way. I have 3 others though. Anyways, a great piece. I can feel the story behind it. Loved it. Keep it up
Wonder46 chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
This is devastatingly beautiful.
Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
This made me cry it is so sad. I loved the way you wrote it as I could really imagine this tearful scene.
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
A very touching poem, that is so innocent despite the tragedy woven inside. An excellent poem, you should be proud.
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Very emotional. Made me feel all sad... but that's okay, that's what you want it to do.
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
My God... Just... just... no words. No words come to mind.
InsaneGreenWriter chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
That was a beautiful poem. I loved it. I lost my little sister when I was about three. I remember talking to her before she was born and when she was stillborn I just didn't understand why the doctors took her away from our family. We still have a cedar box in my parent's room full of her things. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Let's See If It Moves chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Oh Fleece, that was so, so sad! A poignant, plaintive piece, very well executed. Bless the child...