Reviews for Pieces of My Heart
violets-are-violet chapter 4 . 6/6/2012
Ohmyfreakinggosh! I love the connection between the parent and son that you created. I just love it. Bravo!(:
violets-are-violet chapter 3 . 6/6/2012
I loved that it was short. I really enjoy reading your poetry and I loved how you had the other person "in control" of the beating heart. That was genius :)
violets-are-violet chapter 2 . 6/6/2012
Ahhh I loved how you made the persons eyes seem so detached and far away, yet so close. This was brilliant (:
violets-are-violet chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
This was so cute! And I loved your rhymes!(: sorry I couldn't read them last night! I had dance(:

But really, this was too sweet. I loved " I kind of like this crazy kind of love" AWWW :)