Reviews for pieces of us
hecountedstars chapter 6 . 8/7/2012
woah, not expecting this darkness at all. i feel like if i blink too quickly these haikus could fade away. intense snapshots, even without the context to understand them. your use of contrasting emotions works well with the series.
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 5 . 7/30/2012
Aww, cute. :)
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 4 . 7/30/2012
Wow, dark. But very realistic.
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 3 . 6/22/2012
A little too similar to the last poem for my liking. Also, "you are forever mine" sounds a tad melodramatic in my opinion. Nevertheless, watermelon-flavored lips sound yummy!
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
Hahaha, yeah. Lips are lips, whether they're on a boy or a girl. I've tasted both so I know. ;)

Mmm, cherry chapstick. Katy Perry reference? Or not? Either way, that sounds delicious.
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Such a cute and sweet little image. I must admit I smirked as well.