Reviews for Undoing
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Beautifful. Nicely done, keep it up :D
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Ooh, vivid! Very nice. I love the word "diffuses" - it totally makes the poem.
EmoKiss chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
This is really good, you can really write a haiku! It's not like most of them out there that are just realy random and don't make any sense.