|Reviews for Benediction|
| AgentTriggerHappy chapter 2 . 7/31/2012
Whaaaa? I'm not even sure who this is the point of view from.
Still, this is looking good, and I especially love the detail. I can almost FEEL the pain!
| Flyleaf chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Wonderful. Update soon please.
| AgentTriggerHappy chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
This is looking great. I'm looking forward to new chapters- your dialogue and flow is good, with only minor grammatical mistakes. It seems complex and interesting: keep it up!