Reviews for Benediction |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Whaaaa? I'm not even sure who this is the point of view from. Still, this is looking good, and I especially love the detail. I can almost FEEL the pain! More, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is looking great. I'm looking forward to new chapters- your dialogue and flow is good, with only minor grammatical mistakes. It seems complex and interesting: keep it up! |