Reviews for Benediction
AgentTriggerHappy chapter 2 . 7/31/2012
Whaaaa? I'm not even sure who this is the point of view from.

Still, this is looking good, and I especially love the detail. I can almost FEEL the pain!

More, please!
Dauntless Runt chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Wonderful. Update soon please.
AgentTriggerHappy chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
This is looking great. I'm looking forward to new chapters- your dialogue and flow is good, with only minor grammatical mistakes. It seems complex and interesting: keep it up!