Reviews for Brother and Sister
Pilesthewarthog chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Not a bad start. You've definitely concentrated on world-building, but I think Andreas comes off as a bit weak. He seems to play across to a lot of the stereotype and you keep telling us he's anti-social instead of showing us.

Keep writing!
Baby BlueJay 2lazy2login chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
I. Love. This. SO MUCH! X3 Seriously, this is unbelievable! The plot is completely original and full of suspense, and the details and action sequences are perfect. I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this. Also, I'm totally using this as a reference for Lizzy and Andreas's personalities in Silver Linings; it'll be quite helpful.

You rock, buddy! Keep up the great work, and update soon for the rest of you're fans' sakes! :D

Baby BlueJay