|Reviews for Leila's Poetry Collection|
| MagicWords chapter 22 . 1/30/2013
| MagicWords chapter 21 . 1/30/2013
Really sad and beautiful. Goodness, I love your poems!
| MagicWords chapter 5 . 1/30/2013
I loved the set up of this poem, as well as the heightening emotions! Incredible!
| kaitlin1198 chapter 8 . 11/21/2012
i like this one the wording is great
| AFractionOfMySoul chapter 8 . 10/28/2012
Your shorter poems are excellent! (Well, Tribute was brilliant even with it's comparitive leghth, so mcuh for that theory!) I LOVED this one
| AFractionOfMySoul chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
I enjoyed how you developed the idea with every alternate line. I interpret this as a writer sitting down with a new notebook, as her old one is full, and looking at its pristine emptiness greedily, ready to fill it with her magical words. Good job!
| AFractionOfMySoul chapter 6 . 10/28/2012
Very good! I loved this one:D No nitpicking this time!
| AFractionOfMySoul chapter 5 . 10/28/2012
I loved the first four lines. The last one jarred a bit, but that's okay:P
| AFractionOfMySoul chapter 4 . 10/28/2012
Very nice. Liked the sentiment behind the words.
| AFractionOfMySoul chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
The pace and rhythm was good. But somehow, that took a bit away from the lines. MAybe, you could try and rephrase the lines next time? That might help salvage both the rhythm, as well as the words. But good job
| AFractionOfMySoul chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
Like it a lot, and can DEFINITELY identify!
| AFractionOfMySoul chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Definitely not your best, not after reading Wingless! But I liked the repetition of the theme