Reviews for Leila's Poetry Collection
MagicWords chapter 22 . 1/30/2013
MagicWords chapter 21 . 1/30/2013
Really sad and beautiful. Goodness, I love your poems!
MagicWords chapter 5 . 1/30/2013
I loved the set up of this poem, as well as the heightening emotions! Incredible!
kaitlin1198 chapter 8 . 11/21/2012
i like this one the wording is great
AFractionOfMySoul chapter 8 . 10/28/2012
Your shorter poems are excellent! (Well, Tribute was brilliant even with it's comparitive leghth, so mcuh for that theory!) I LOVED this one
AFractionOfMySoul chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
I enjoyed how you developed the idea with every alternate line. I interpret this as a writer sitting down with a new notebook, as her old one is full, and looking at its pristine emptiness greedily, ready to fill it with her magical words. Good job!
AFractionOfMySoul chapter 6 . 10/28/2012
Very good! I loved this one:D No nitpicking this time!
AFractionOfMySoul chapter 5 . 10/28/2012
I loved the first four lines. The last one jarred a bit, but that's okay:P
AFractionOfMySoul chapter 4 . 10/28/2012
Very nice. Liked the sentiment behind the words.
AFractionOfMySoul chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
The pace and rhythm was good. But somehow, that took a bit away from the lines. MAybe, you could try and rephrase the lines next time? That might help salvage both the rhythm, as well as the words. But good job
AFractionOfMySoul chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
Like it a lot, and can DEFINITELY identify!
AFractionOfMySoul chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Definitely not your best, not after reading Wingless! But I liked the repetition of the theme