|Reviews for Mother|
| ensconced chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
I am speechless.
Great job :)
| this wild abyss chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
[From the Review Marathon, link in profile]
Wow. Like the rest of your poetry I've read tonight, this is really good. First off, I love love love the way this is all one sentence. It has this really breathless feel to it that I adore, like the narrator is running out of breath but needs to keep talking, just to vent or rage or something. Such a cool effect. And I like how you managed to put so much punch into this. The narrator's words are very strong and almost violent, but that works here because of how you've presented the topic. And again, I love your enjambment because it always comes at just the right time and breaks up the big, long sentence in a really effective way.