Reviews for Gaia
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
I love the description in this! The words are rich and the mythological references laced throughout this make it even stronger.

[ pitying, smothering curse/That creeps up the Dryad, with claws like a beast/And sells off its parts, for new worth] Love these lines! The image of the curse as the beast was well-done, and I like the extra connotation of it selling itself.

[There are noises I'd rather not listen,] This wording's a little funky. Normally you listen *to* something, or else hear them.

-Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
AchievingNirvana chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
Vivid! I love it!