|Reviews for Confessions|
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
There is much wisdom here disguised as poetry. We all should think about it when we think we know everything there is to know about someone.
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
VERY nice. I can relate to this poem well, and it is superb. The emotions, the truth, all too wonderful. Amazing, keep it up :D
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
I like the tone of this. It's assertive and proud, but definitely shows the vulnerability behind it.
I'd keep an eye on your wording, though, because it's often wordy or awkward. For example, "So next time when I say words/
But don't tell you the reasons," could be condensed to something like "when I give words without reasons" or something along those lines.
-Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)