|Reviews for The Guilt|
| AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Speachless, absolutly speachless.
This is amazing and so so so brilliant.
The line 'A ruined tissue of black and blood' was just genius and beautiful in a morbid kind of way. The black made me think of ink and writers while the blood showed the pain. BRILLIANT!
You are so good and so amazing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
"Okay so this is probably one of the most depressing things I've ever written…" So lets add a smiley there :)
You really are one of the best writers I read on here. Maybe take away the "one of, 's" bits too.
| BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
It's certainly dark and twisted but it has a great flow and rhythm as well
It creats a verry darkish vibe throughout the whole thing
You did a fantastic job on the darkness ;)