Speachless, absolutly speachless.
This is amazing and so so so brilliant.
The line 'A ruined tissue of black and blood' was just genius and beautiful in a morbid kind of way. The black made me think of ink and writers while the blood showed the pain. BRILLIANT!
You are so good and so amazing!

"Okay so this is probably one of the most depressing things I've ever written…" So lets add a smiley there :)
You really are one of the best writers I read on here. Maybe take away the "one of, 's" bits too.

It's certainly dark and twisted but it has a great flow and rhythm as well
It creats a verry darkish vibe throughout the whole thing
You did a fantastic job on the darkness ;)