Reviews for The Guilt |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Speachless, absolutly speachless. This is amazing and so so so brilliant. The line 'A ruined tissue of black and blood' was just genius and beautiful in a morbid kind of way. The black made me think of ink and writers while the blood showed the pain. BRILLIANT! You are so good and so amazing! |
![]() ![]() "Okay so this is probably one of the most depressing things I've ever written…" So lets add a smiley there :) You really are one of the best writers I read on here. Maybe take away the "one of, 's" bits too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's certainly dark and twisted but it has a great flow and rhythm as well It creats a verry darkish vibe throughout the whole thing You did a fantastic job on the darkness ;) |