Reviews for failure
SkinnyLove203 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
This is awesome! xx
True Talker chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
I like how you explained to your readers why you did what you did. I also love "all while I was in love, in hate with you."... It describes relationships well and it's so true about writing. You write about it all. I also liked the ending. You really explained the impact this person had on you with great imagery like the bacteria and test. It does suck though that you felt you had to delete the pieces...

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skersey chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
wow. this is strong, and i love the images at the end. so much feeling with this. you've got guts. "words that as a whole created a film of bacteria that have been analyzed to death." My favorite line