Reviews for Something For the Pain
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I love this!
It reminds me of an add I saw on tv the other day about how if we don't take care of the earth by 2050 everything will die on it
The falling part is scary it's like in Alice in wonderland when she seems to fall forever down the rabbit hole
;) ah-maze-ing XD
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Now this is spine-chilling spooky because you give a new perspective on something but you give it that spooky edge with the last line really hitting the gut hard. I really enjoyed it!
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Good piece, liked it. It was a clear piece and had some really good ideas and was really effective great job! I loved the delayed rhyme! EPIC!
Grimpeddler chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
I like it. I love the delayed rhymes. You think it's free verse, and then-WHAMMO! Genius.
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Lovely poem. Keep it up :D