One word for you. A.W.E.S.O.M.E. Like Barney Stinson awesome.

Way cool storyline. Keep updating.

:)

Nephythys

I loved your story, it's really good and i hope to read more on this story because i enjoied it immensley. so far it's super good and i wish there was more because I think you are very detailed in your writing i could see it as i read it it was very good and keep up the great work.