Reviews for Lie
wolvesdrinktea chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Is it bad I think this would make a really kick-ass song? Oh, the possibilities *-*

This piece has such a powerful message, so kudos for boiling it down to just a few verses.

One down, ninety nine to go! :3

Char x
daniellegypt chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
I enjoyed where you went with this poem. Specifically the last line, it truly brought the piece to a great place. I really loved the line "I've got the Devil in me and I'm keeping him safe and sound." It's a sort of darkness that you're proud of and I love it!
lookingwest chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
From the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)

I liked the last line because of the emotional charge of it in relation to the rest of the poem-it really comes at you and the voice sounds quite clever for a lasting impression. I think my favorite image in this poem was the first stanza, last line, "I've got the Devil in me", I thought that image was strong and well done, plus it gives a good metaphor on top of that, and I like how you changed the "bad" into something that the speaker wants to keep "safe and sound". Overall a strong charged poem!