Reviews for the girl i once knew
x.x.M.i.s.s.A.l.i.c.e.x.x chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
To me, this is an perfect example of loss of innocence. The 'girl that was once known' to me is an girl that used to be happy with no harm done to her and everyone loved her, and now since the girl grew up, she faces some people who hate her and she has been harmed. When you are little, you don't really notice the harm that can be commited in this world, and when you grow up, it can really hit you hard. This is an great poem, with a great eye-opener for some people.
Volleyball247 chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
That's amazing. This is a great poem. I like how you used words that I would never have thought of. So keep up the good work.
BlackSun21 chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Very touching; great job at catching the essence of nostalgia.