wowwww this was the sweetest loveliest story i've seen completed on this whole category, and i want my own pat please and thank you 3 if this were ao3 i'd give you all the kudos. fantastic story (and so well-written too!)

okay, this was seriously fantastic. Sometimes you just need to read this kind of story, and I'm certainly keeping tabs on it... Lovely 3 Thanks for writing this! Now i'm off to see if you have any other amazingness written...

I feel like a just took a bite out of that chocolate monstrosity of a cupcake. Too sweet.
Seriously, I don't know which character I'm least in love with. Elle with her cool-headed rationality (and for such a young person) or Pat and his passionate spontaneity or them as a functioning unit or Elle's brothers or lovely, lovely Ari or even the not so bitchy ex-girlfriend. They're all beautiful. And sorta eerie. I mean, are those brothers telepathic or just terribly good guessers?

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This is sooo sweet. I love it. I love Logan. She is fantastic, and Pat is a dream. Would be fun to see his panties in knots over jealousy or insecurity. But this is perfect. Thanks so much.

Loved it! wished you published more stories, your an amazing writer :)

This story honestly made my day. It is hands down one of the most adorable stories I've ever read and any girl who reads this will honestly say "I want a Pat in my life" because I super honestly do. And he doesn't even have to be a celebrity, there needs to be a guy with Pat's awesome and beautiful and schmexy personality.

I really love how it's so easy to relate to Elle and how cool-headed she can be. Honestly, one of my favorite scenes between Elle and Pat were when they first had sex and Pat is explaining to her why. She doesn't freak out or automatically react in the way Pat expects (or, let's face it, how a lot of girls would react) but calmly listens to what he has to say and still accepts and loves him no matter what. She's honestly an amazing character.

Thank you so much for posting this gem of a story online!

Your story made me smile like an idiot for over an hour. Seriously. Like I SO want a Pat now. here can I buy one? Please! Too great, really!

OMG! DIS STORY WAS AWESOME! i smiled tru it all it's a happy story i loved. U wrote it well...any oda person, i'm sure it wld hav come out dry and cliche. U're on point girl! Thumbs up;)

I positively loved this story.
It was just what I needed at the moment - full of sweet, happy feelings and without much drama. I loved your portrayal of Elle. I don't think I've liked a protagonist as much as I liked her for a long time :)

I'd love to read more from you ;)

- bells

This is absolutely adorable, and the whole time I was reading it I had a smile on my face. Not gonna lie, a little fluff is good for the soul every now and then. Thanks for the great read. :)

How is this complete? I want more! It's really good, really, really good. I found you on the SKOW nominees website, I hope you win!

OMYGOSH! this is awesome! Heehee I can't wait to see what happens next. All your characters are totally relatable and the writing is very smooth, not to mention the plot-it hooked me right away. Nicely done and DO NOT STOP. XD

Amazing story! I loved the ending and every part! If only relationships can be as happy and every man as great as Pat. Awww!

OMG this was just the cutest fic I've read in a while! Pat is absolutely adorable, as is Elle and Ari and basically everyone in this story is just lovable in their own way. The voice of Elle is strong and unique and I loved it! Definitely going in my faves! :)