Reviews for Where I Can't Follow?
Miya-chan40 chapter 18 . 9/20/2013
Okay...I've finally read the first story and finished this and it was AMAZING. I'm just going to do a review for both stories in this one because I'm just that lazy haha.. Well your character development was beautiful to me a lot of stories don't give good development and how a basic teen or adult would act in those types of situations...by the way the ending of chapter 15 was soo funny!(:
PurpleDinoPpl66 chapter 18 . 8/26/2013
This story, the first one and this sequel, are probably the best pieces of writing I've read online.. its amazing! Keep on writing!
shjelm1 chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
I enjoied the story, but readung tjis after the first book being first pov made it confusing to be honest i perfer first piv over third any story.
Not sure chapter 18 . 4/19/2013
Well, overall, I must say that I like your characters. The grammar is truly terrible at times, though, and that made it tough to get through. I like your overall story, even though it was tied together with a bow. But that's nice, sometimes. One thing that did reeeally bother me, though... If Benji is ten/almost eleven-unless I misunderstood- then the way he acts is totally unrealistic. I currently have an eleven-year-old boy in my family, and I know that he wouldn't splash kids, pout, call his mother "Mommy," and that ice cream wouldn't make anything better.. But that's just me. Other than that, I liked it. Looking forward to more about this couple in the Raine story! Thanks for posting.
Alex chapter 18 . 4/17/2013
I was really disappointed in this chapter. I just felt that you rushed it. Like why not show the proposal or the wedding or life with a new baby or even explain why they waited ten years before having a second child. I really have enjoyed this story, but this last chapter left short
lanae96 chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
I loved it ! So sad its over though : (
Guest chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
So sad to see this story end, but absolutely LOVED it!
Kcoarra chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
Omg! Its over noooooooo! I love Tenley and Colton they are one of my favorite couples I have read about. I enjoyed this story soooo much and I can't wait for to read about Raine!
Guest chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
I really loved the ending! Tenley and Colton are my favorite out of all your couples can wait for Raines story!
beverlyamethyst16 chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
I am so sad it is over :( I have loved DFFTP and this so much! Thank you for writing it! You are an amazing writer, and this is an amazing story :D
cat10985 chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
awwwww. can't believe it is over soo soon. I was kinda bummed.. It felt a little rushed.. Like we never see Tenley and Kimber talk after what Kimber told her.. I wanted to know what Tenley felt after that. And then i was hoping for another scene with the grandma and Tenley and her standing up for herself.. And what happened with Tenley's Ex who was bugging her in the beginning.. Humm.. maybe it was just me.. but i felt there were some holes with some things. But i really enjoyed anyways. They are great and it will be sad to see them go. Anyways great job! loved the story even if i was bummed about the holes and how fast it ended. Love your writing!
Smartgirl94 chapter 18 . 4/15/2013
Aww, it was such a good book. I can't wait for the new one ;D
DarkAngel1130 chapter 18 . 4/15/2013
This was perfect! Seriously, I loved it and I also was close to tears. I'm sad to see their story end but as long as their more with someone else that's okay. And I love how their baby boy came out to be like both of them and not just one. And Colton is so much more mature! Which is good because that means that he'll forever be responsible and caring and thoughtful and all these other good things! :) Thanks for writing such an amazing story and for sharing it with us readers! Oh, and uploading this chapter today!
hangeoreb chapter 18 . 4/15/2013
I'm so sad it's finished but I'm soo happy they got married :)
EMoTiONSz91 chapter 18 . 4/15/2013
I loved this story. It is amazing and i cant believe what they accomplished together. It was a great ending and i cant wait to read Raines story :)
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