Reviews for Downfall
meowmie chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Now that's a death will and testament I would love to read in real life! Haha.. I thoroughly enjoyed this!

But one mistake I spotted was the line "... slight of hand." It's supposed to be "...sleight of hand."
FictionLover21 chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
I loved this story bestie! :)...
S. Jacks chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Thumbs up, friend. I thoroughly enjoyed that! I don't know, it just caught on the moment the author asked for someone to walk his dog. It's such an endearing request which caused a lot of empathy in me. And then that was totally flipped on end when I started noticing the tongue-in-cheek comments, little ironies and jokes. Sad he's passed :( Would love to see the character elsewhere, or at least a reincarnation.
Faith K chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Oh boy. Wow. I mean...

Seriously, this was well-written and well thought-out. And generally, just hilarious.

The guy whose last will and testament this is must be filthy rich, cause boy can he write!

Anyways, here's the deal : AWESOME! Specifically the part about the enemies and the ending. I loved the ending.