|Reviews for Slocomb's Pond|
| Blood and Butterflies chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
Peer pressure strikes again. Very suspenseful! Can't wait to read more.
| Blood and Butterflies chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Wow! Very exciting. I wonder what the narrator had to do to be part of the group? Onto the next chapter!
| 11's-SevenofHearts chapter 4 . 6/25/2012
Nice update. One thing confused me, though. The boys said that four people went missing near the pond, and then you mentioned five: Percival Slocomb, Otis Smith, Bert Hinson, Grayson Jones, and Jocelyn Meriwether. Besides that, though, this was a good chapter.
| 11's-SevenofHearts chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
I like your attention to detail. Nice characterization, too. I'm excited to see where you go with this. :)