Reviews for Slocomb's Pond |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Peer pressure strikes again. Very suspenseful! Can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Very exciting. I wonder what the narrator had to do to be part of the group? Onto the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice update. One thing confused me, though. The boys said that four people went missing near the pond, and then you mentioned five: Percival Slocomb, Otis Smith, Bert Hinson, Grayson Jones, and Jocelyn Meriwether. Besides that, though, this was a good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your attention to detail. Nice characterization, too. I'm excited to see where you go with this. :) |