Hi, this is great, the summar intrigues me, thank you!

...I'm sad there's not more to this...

I'm unsure if this is completed or not or has just gone forever without updates but I kinda got sucked into all of this haha the writing really improved from the first chapter to this last one.

I wish I could see if there was more to this ending ;-;

I feel bad, for all of them. I'm not sure who I feel bad for the most. Lorena certainly is quite the stubborn soul. Some people use stubborness as some cutesy flaw to make their mary sue "less perfect" but you actually made her bullishness a problem, which I really appreciate.

Anyway... yeah. Whatever happens, I enjoyed the read!

This took a turn I wasn't expecting 0.0 now I'm curious to how it's gonna end...

when will you update OMG

poor Lorena.I felt really bad about her and like for every woman that can't have children :(
Dave is so all the fooling around it was about to happen that he's going to knock up some .and Nate was way too hard with her in last

PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASEEE

This was a long time coming! I missed this :)

As always, it was a genuine pleasure. And as always, I wished you updated frequently.

Sincerely, The Cynical Nerd

the drama wow this is so depressing honestly
with all of the open marriage going on, i did expect some pregnancy drama, i can only hope a little that it isnt dave's baby, to know that she cant give him baby, and knowing that some random woman is pregnant with his baby ... i think i kind of understand lorena .. and that makes nathan a jerk lol because he keeps being pushy
honestly, i dont like all of the characters .. they are all selfish
but can't get enough reading it because i want to know how this is going to end

I have so many feels right now. This story is driving me absolutely insane, in all the best ways.

The drama, ugh. I'm not going to be able to think about anything other than this story until you update again, so please don't make me wait another year. This story is far too good to not know the end.

Thanks for updating, and keep up the amazing writing!

Wonderfully written as always. You are as articulate as you are passionate in the portrayal of Nate, Lorena and Dave.

I particularly liked the flashback sequence, always good to have the back story to fill in the little black holes. Your skills at believable dialogue are just beyond compare, I feel like I am really there amongst them as they play out their lives.

I also found these phrases to be particularly picturesque in putting a vision in my head:

...no other man's fingertips tracing his name on the bare canvas of her back...

Hahahahahah I can't wait for more!

I was so happy to see you post this! Again, lovely writing and the flashback really tied it all together as he saw himself in the kid on the subway. I'm so very happy to be reading you again. :)

Great new chapter. Thank you for continuing the story.

I don't guess I've ever reviewed this - or if I did it had been a while between chapters. Anyway - so, so glad to see this updated, I was just thinking about it the other day. It has been a major roller coaster ride and sometimes I get so frustrated and down-trodden with the characters, I want to scream. What Nate said to Lorena - is true. Dave gave up a lot while not asking for the extra sides that it felt like to me, she insisted on. She really needs to suck it up and decide what she wants to happen in her marriage and Nate needs to make some serious amends to Dave, not that much can be un-done. But, talking is definitely the only way to go forward. I really, really hope the wait isn't as long as before.

I can't be lived you stoppede this ! It's so goooooooooooooooooodddd

PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KMG