Reviews for Forever
The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I like the softness of this tone because it really does give the impression of being in a dream, all wispy and gentle to the eyes and ears, talking about hard-core philosophy questions but just drifting along in a sense. Normally it doesn't work, but this is one of those rare cases when it does if you can pull it off, and you have.

I don't like the harder sounds like "-ct-" showing up. They rarely do, but they really break the softer rhythm you had going.
walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
This definately made me think. A poem full of questions, this is something new. Nice work.